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Two years ago, I planted a thin sapling in my backyard.
两年前，我在后院种下了一株细弱的树苗。
Every weekend, I watered it and watched it grow slowly.
每个周末，我都给它浇水，看着它慢慢生长。
Sometimes, I felt impatient—why wasn't it taller yet?
有时，我会感到不耐烦——为什么它还没长高？
But my grandfather said, "Things that grow slowly often grow strong."
但我的爷爷说：“长得慢的东西，常常长得结实。”
This year, it finally grew thick branches and green leaves.
今年，它终于长出了粗壮的枝条和翠绿的叶子。
Now I understand: true growth takes time and patience.
现在我明白了：真正的成长需要时间和耐心。
Like this tree, our dreams also need constant care and belief.
就像这棵树，我们的梦想也需要持续的浇灌和信念。
Don't rush. Just keep doing the right thing, day after day.
不要着急。只需坚持做正确的事，日复一日。
Word Count: 98 words
考点清单《重点掌握》
1. 一般过去时 - planted, watered, watched, felt, said
2. 时间状语从句 - Two years ago, Every weekend, This year
3. 宾语从句 - why wasn't it taller yet?
4. 直接引语 - "Things that grow slowly often grow strong."
5. 现在完成时 - Now I understand (隐含完成状态)
6. 比较级 - taller, stronger, thicker
7. 情态动词 - need, wasn't
8. 并列句 - and watched it grow, and green leaves
9. 介词短语 - in my backyard, like this tree
10. 祈使句 - Don't rush.
11. 固定短语 - day after day
12. 状语 - slowly, finally, constantly
写作思路解析：
这篇作文通过个人种树的真实经历，阐述“耐心与坚持”的哲理，符合中考“贴近生活、富有启示”的命题趋势。文章使用具体时间线（two years ago, every weekend, this year）增强叙事真实感，并用爷爷的话自然引出主题。结尾将树与梦想类比，升华主旨，符合“通俗易懂又富有哲理”的要求。全文控制在100词内，句子结构简单清晰，适合中考模仿。
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