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假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明,是学校英语报“排忧解难”社团的成员,你收到校友 Lynn 的一封求助信,请根据她的来信写封回信。
2024年(上海卷)高考作文题目
“我是高中生,我想做饭,但父母不让。我该怎么做才能让他们改变主意?”

这话题我觉得很不错,大家都有话说。不过题目的要求,好像有点问题。题目要求考生对 Lynn 提建议,可是她父母不让她做饭的原因究竟是什么,题目没说,这样考生就无法有针对性地提建议,只能去猜测、泛泛而谈了。
因为我偶尔做饭,这话题合我意,我就写了一篇。
Dear Lynn,
Sorry to hear that your parents won’t let you cook. Frankly, I cannot understand because I sometimes cook and I know we can get a benefit from cookery, as long as safety is ensured.
For starters, to be able to cook makes you feel more independent and boosts your confidence in yourself to cope with life. Plus, when you cook, you actually help lighten your parents’ load of domestic work and they get to enjoy more chill-out time at home. What’s more, for us students cooking is a great escape from the stress of intense studying. Your brain gets a well-deserved rest when you concentrate on preparing your favourite dish in the kitchen.
If your parents fear for your safety, why don’t you ask them to personally instruct you to follow the kitchen safety rules?
So, try to convey these ideas to your parents, and I’m sure they’ll eventually give you the green light to cook. Good luck!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
亲爱的林恩:
听说你父母不让你做饭,我很遗憾。坦白说,我不能理解,因为我有时会做饭,我知道只要安全得到保证,我们可以从烹饪中获益。
首先,会做饭会让你感觉更独立,增强你对自己应付生活的信心。此外,当你做饭时,你实际上帮助减轻了父母的家务负担,他们可以享受更多的在家放松时间。更重要的是,对于我们学生来说,烹饪是逃避紧张学*压力的好方法。当你专心在厨房准备你最喜欢的菜时,你的大脑得到了应得的休息。
如果你的父母担心你的安全,为什么不请他们亲自指导你遵守厨房安全规则呢?
所以,试着把这些想法传达给你的父母,我相信他们最终会同意你做饭。祝你好运!
致以最美好的祝愿,
李明
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